I expect a trio of haiku has a special name and if Bjorn http://brudberg.wordpress.com/ reads I hope he will tell me.
Four thousand years past
flourishing on Scorhill Down
ancient settlement
Solid granite rocks
disgorged by volcanic fire
circle hallowed ground
Tall maidens of stone
standing for millenia
sheltering their hearths
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About Lucid Gypsy
Gilly Mbachu Goldsworthy is a mum to two kids that are supposed to be grown up and mma to a four year old and a new born baby boy. None of that means that I am grown up though! I love writing – travel and quite edgy fiction – and being an OU student for a degree which remains to be seen. What I do best though is counselling; I’ve been privileged to work with many people through big changes.
I think the second Haiku is particularly brilliant
Great job Gilly.
tremendously rich and evocative, well done gilly
This is brilliant, Gilly. The blend so perfectly
I don’t know much about haiku or poetry but this is pleasing to read, Gilly.
I love this line: disgorged by volcanic fire
it is just called a Haiku Trio Gilly…you could remane it maybe a triptych haiku
I love this.. I think I like Haiku too…